Homepage teardown · 48-hour turnaround
Your homepage is talking about you, not to your visitor. Let's fix that.
Send me your URL. I'll go through it line by line — headline, hero copy, CTAs, the works — and hand back exactly what's costing you sign-ups, in writing, in two days.
Copy that's actually moved the number
Client results"I've worked with Mohit many times. He never fails to deliver conversion-boosting copy. Last time, he was able to lift our conversion rate from 0.3% to 4.5%. If you want someone who can figure out your brand's tone and deeply understand your audience, Mohit is the guy."
"Mohit has been one of my go-to copywriters for a long time — six years now. He writes engaging, persuasive content, and he delivers on time."
"The lead magnet was well-researched and offered a ton of value. The email series mixed pure value with soft-selling. A huge thumbs up from me."
What lands in your inbox
The order slip-
A section-by-section teardown page
A private page built just for your homepage — a screenshot of each section (hero, features, social proof, CTA) with my notes right underneath it, the same way I'd mark up a client draft.
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Rewritten hero copy (if needed)
If your headline and hero copy are already doing their job, I'll say so. If not, you'll get two or three real alternatives, ready to paste in.
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A prioritized fix list
Ranked by how much each change is likely to move the needle, so you know what to fix first if you only have an afternoon.
How this actually runs
Three steps, in orderSend your URL
Pay $99, drop your homepage link and a line on who it's for. Two minutes, no call required to get started.
I mark it up
I go through it the way I'd edit a client's draft — line by line, section by section, against how your actual visitor reads and decides.
You get it in 48 hours
A link to your teardown page and any rewritten copy, landed in your inbox — ready to hand to whoever builds the page.
Straightforward pricing
No retainer- Teardown pageIncluded
- Rewritten hero copyIf needed
- Prioritized fix listIncluded
- Turnaround48 hours
Taking on 5 teardowns this week. Slots refill Monday.
Before you ask
Is this just AI feedback?
No. I read your page myself and write the notes myself. I use tools to move faster, not to replace the judgment — the same way I've written copy for clients for the last six-plus years.
Do you redesign the page too?
No — this is copy and messaging, not layout or visual design. You'll get exact wording, not a Figma file. Most people hand it straight to whoever builds their site.
What if I want you to write the new copy in full?
That's a separate, bigger engagement. The teardown is the fastest way to see how I think before committing to that — most clients who book a teardown come back for the rewrite.
What do you need from me to start?
Just your homepage URL and one line on who your ideal customer is. If there's context I can't get from the page itself, I'll ask.